Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Oh Really? [Trance]]

Love the panning of the hat in the intro!! Genius!

The soft intro was just incredible, the panning effects were pretty awesome too! Though I would probably warn to use it sparingly, it can be overused at times ;)

Also I would probably get rid of the LovePhilter at 1:00 that kind of breaks the song a little... I can hear what you were trying to do with a break down effect, but I would attempt this with another method if possible. ((Only complaint I have for the whole song :D ))

Love the melody, especially the chosen instruments to play the sounds, you did a great job!

I agree with JakobePaulobe about the drums, just a little mastering and editing and they will be more 'trancey' :)

Greak work! Thanks for the upload :D!!

Or4nges responds:

Thanks! I was starting to feel like this song wasn't good lol. I'm not used to having
3.60's Maybe I just got unlucky with some zero-bombs :/

Anyway, I took your advice on the filter. (kinda) I changed it up anyway, It was kinda bothering me too, I shoulda spent more time on it, but I forgot when I got cought up in the outro.

I'll see what I can do about the drums, as they're not my forte lol.

Thanks for the review!

[Elektronisk]

Nais

This be sick man!

lacks any type of serious emotion, but it has feeling non-the less so it still is awesome XD

Thanks for the upload!

RacmusDK responds:

Well I'm glad you liked it ;)
I'm not exactly sure what you mean, but cool !

:)
Wehlast

[Phantasmic Machine]

Not bad :D

I like the intro :D 0:00 - 0:40 but it gets a little long without much effects or variation.

1:04, its a cool transition to the beat, but there isn't much for an OMG IT JUST GOT COOL type of transition ye know?

Though I do think you accomplished the whole pumping/chill thing ;)

Great job!

Kreyowitz responds:

Why thank you! Yes, I do agree the intro is a bit long, but I was going for the calm and cool, to the OMGIGOTTARUNAROUNDINCIRCLES kind of feeling.

[fucking skype]

Heavy metal?

This isn't even a song, at the very least you should have posted under voice clips.

Archealor responds:

its haevy metal cant u tell

[Endeavour - My Hardstyle]

Found you =0

I WAS WONDERING WHY I COULDN'T FIND YOUR STUFF ANYMORE!

And then I checked my review replies :)

is this finished? ((JK lol))

Only thing I would suggest, is to get a HUGE deep hardstyle kick going, the one in there is kind of wimpy for the song I think :/ otherwise this is pretty bomb! Finish sometime :D ((And let me know when))

Endeavour responds:

Hey there,
The kick i use here is just for the solo.
Im still thinking of a damn hardstyle melody for it.
My inspiration kinda lost me at moment, but soon i will have, and ill lengthen this song to 4 / 5 minutes.

Thanks for your reply =D,
Endeavour

[Trance Loop ~livewire~]

ah, I see

5/5
5/10 because it was just missing the other 50% of the song.

So did you just get the program? Because this isn't horrible, there just seems to be no advanced editing, like mastering or anything ((though the fade in of the synth volume was pretty cool :) ))

I would suggest editing the crap out of the drum samples, they sound to basic and general ye know what I mean? They need more life to them, more oomph on the bass kick, more like... reverb maybe be the best way to say on the hats and such.

I would also suggest a bass line, those are always nice. This is completely lacking in that area :)

Maybe an instrument actually playing a melody or something too, that is a good thing.

Try to play with the sounds you have, the best way to make something good, is to make it your own, take a sound and make it how you want it to sound, that way it isn't the exact same sounds as other beginning FL Studio users who don't know what their doing ((YET!!))

So, good luck! And nice work on the composing :) ADD STUFF :D!!

DJLIVEWIRE responds:

Thanks for the response! the reason why the song seems to be lacking is because i am currently using the trial version of FL Studios, so i wont be able to save. But, i will be posting an updated version quite soon.

[St0rmChaser - BassHunter [RmX]]

I love your responce to the review bellow XD

And thus I will attempt to give you a very helpful and motivational review :D ((if I am even able lol))

First off, I LOVE the sound choices! Except for the bass that is during the main melody intro, that sounds really distorted and grated a little too much. ((And almost out of key due to such distortion)) I would suggest using a Bass that is more punchy and bouncing, not so much the super phat grated bass that is pure saw lol.

Now when I hear these songs, I am thinking of a story right, and this doesn't really give that feel, and I would have to honestly say it is because of the fuzzy bass, it just kind of kills the mood that I believe Boten Anna and Dota were supposed to have, ye know?

LOVE THE TOMS!! Don't change those ;) their wonderful.

The intro kick is pretty awesome not gunna lie, was expecting a little more though to be honest, and if at all possible I would love to hear a remade version of this with just MORE yes :D?

I think the main issue is the bass, the intro bass is awesome, but I would think a more punchy bass following the main melody would work very nice, and a sharper lead synth, it seems the high end of the sound is being killed with the bass and central spectrum sounds. Which can be good for hardstyle and more deep bass focused songs ((like DJ D'agustino's Bla bla bla)) But anyway, I would suggest making a stronger lead ;)

So over all --

1 - More punchy bass line that is more bouncing ((do you know how to make the basshunter bass?))

2 - Stronger lead synth!! Probably a saw instrument with a lower underlining plucked trance synth, that sounds awesome ;)

3 - If you feel like being brave, you can always change up the melody some, instead of doing note for note what basshunter does, because that adds personality and your own touch of character and your own twist to it, which is great for listeners to be able to pick it out and be all "Holy crap that is new but exciting!" So, theres that.

4 - Try and get some more FX samples, they help fill in a lot of dead time, you have a TON of exciting awesome ones in here everywhere, so don't worry too much about this one, just a thought ;) ((like random two word vocals and such))

Great job!!

10/10
5/5

St0rmChaser responds:

Wow that is one hell of a review.
That is exactly where i hoped for lol.
This helped me a lot, even so much that I got the motivation to produce again.
I also became a feautured artist with this account, which motivated me like hell aswell.

I will keep your points and criticm in mind for when I am making a new version of basshunter.
Right now I am working on Out of the blue remix. I remix it from the real version from Ferry Corsten (SystemF) you might know the artist.

Thanks for your support, and for the extremely great review =D,
Endeavour <- new account name

[St0rm - HardTrance[RmX]]

EYA'!

Amazing work here :D!!

((Cant believe I never added you to favorites yet :O? ))

St0rmChaser responds:

wow, thanks man =D,
very much appreciated !!.

haha =P, yea i guess my songs get a bit more attention now that im a featured artist (god knows why ng chose me, but ohwell).

Btw, this is an old account of mine. my latest songs are on an account called : Endeavour

Thanks again for your support mate,
Greets,
Endeavour

[Kazmo - Visionary [NG Cut]]

//Alright!

Just a little while ago I was wondering what happened to you! So glad you didn't disappear like a lot of other artists :D

Another epic track!

Kazmo responds:

I'm back :3 Thanks!

[FLS trance FTW]

Make me look like a noobsauce why don't ye :p

Lol but seriously, this is awesome, really just chillax and pro quality sounds, I can definitely tell you take the time to actually work on your songs and make sure the sounds are perfect and planned :)

Someone once told me: "It only takes half a brain to make Techno, that is why it is so stupid." So I got really upset, but then inspired ((Because I thought it would be easy lol)) To try and create some techno, then I discovered first hand his comment was empty and way false!

Great work! ((Sorry for random spam))

Barrellaj responds:

haha thanks dude for an awesome review, I need to hear more like that.. and believe it or not this is just about the first song I've ever mad and it really is just flat out simple. drum kick, bass number 14 or so on nexus, a nice pluck, and a saw and there's the song. but I really do appreciate cause I've always thought of this as one of my best songs.

and you're friend might actually be a little right, it's almost easier to make techno the less you know. sometimes it gets overwhelming when you know what to do, but ya wing it when ya don't and it comes out not half bad :P