Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stephen4705- Into the sunset]

So far epic!

What system do you use to make this? This is incredible :D

I've not heard anything like it anywhere!

Please do finish!!

STEPHEN4705 responds:

Wow, thanks! :D

I'm currently using Fl studio 9, with a whole load of freeware downloads.

Ste :D

[(Dj-Admin)Stuck in my Head]

SYTRUS!!

I love sytrus settings :D

This is awesome! The only thing I am unsure if I like or not is the clap, how it goes once, then one and one. Yeah, only for that one little while.

But other than that it's awesome :D Thanks for the upload! ((Try adding some strings or pad in the background for a boost of over all sound and feel))

Djadmin responds:

Thanks for the review, but I may not be able to change anything as I only have a demo of FL. I will try though.

[-AEF- Midnight]

Amazing!

Poor cat :'(

But this song is wonderful!! I love the blend of VG synths and more popular electro sounds :D

AetherFlaer responds:

Thanks dude. I'm glad you liked it!

[#50(Original mix)]

Oh wow those drum smaples :O

These drums are unreal dude :O Like, beautiful! lol

Just over all great work, I cant believe this is your first upload!! I LOVE IT!

Thanks for the upload :D

EOT responds:

heh, thank you! :)

No problem XD

[Oh Really? [Trance]]

Love the panning of the hat in the intro!! Genius!

The soft intro was just incredible, the panning effects were pretty awesome too! Though I would probably warn to use it sparingly, it can be overused at times ;)

Also I would probably get rid of the LovePhilter at 1:00 that kind of breaks the song a little... I can hear what you were trying to do with a break down effect, but I would attempt this with another method if possible. ((Only complaint I have for the whole song :D ))

Love the melody, especially the chosen instruments to play the sounds, you did a great job!

I agree with JakobePaulobe about the drums, just a little mastering and editing and they will be more 'trancey' :)

Greak work! Thanks for the upload :D!!

Or4nges responds:

Thanks! I was starting to feel like this song wasn't good lol. I'm not used to having
3.60's Maybe I just got unlucky with some zero-bombs :/

Anyway, I took your advice on the filter. (kinda) I changed it up anyway, It was kinda bothering me too, I shoulda spent more time on it, but I forgot when I got cought up in the outro.

I'll see what I can do about the drums, as they're not my forte lol.

Thanks for the review!

[Elektronisk]

Nais

This be sick man!

lacks any type of serious emotion, but it has feeling non-the less so it still is awesome XD

Thanks for the upload!

RacmusDK responds:

Well I'm glad you liked it ;)
I'm not exactly sure what you mean, but cool !

:)
Wehlast

[Phantasmic Machine]

Not bad :D

I like the intro :D 0:00 - 0:40 but it gets a little long without much effects or variation.

1:04, its a cool transition to the beat, but there isn't much for an OMG IT JUST GOT COOL type of transition ye know?

Though I do think you accomplished the whole pumping/chill thing ;)

Great job!

Kreyowitz responds:

Why thank you! Yes, I do agree the intro is a bit long, but I was going for the calm and cool, to the OMGIGOTTARUNAROUNDINCIRCLES kind of feeling.

[fucking skype]

Heavy metal?

This isn't even a song, at the very least you should have posted under voice clips.

Archealor responds:

its haevy metal cant u tell

[Endeavour - My Hardstyle]

Found you =0

I WAS WONDERING WHY I COULDN'T FIND YOUR STUFF ANYMORE!

And then I checked my review replies :)

is this finished? ((JK lol))

Only thing I would suggest, is to get a HUGE deep hardstyle kick going, the one in there is kind of wimpy for the song I think :/ otherwise this is pretty bomb! Finish sometime :D ((And let me know when))

Endeavour responds:

Hey there,
The kick i use here is just for the solo.
Im still thinking of a damn hardstyle melody for it.
My inspiration kinda lost me at moment, but soon i will have, and ill lengthen this song to 4 / 5 minutes.

Thanks for your reply =D,
Endeavour

[Trance Loop ~livewire~]

ah, I see

5/5
5/10 because it was just missing the other 50% of the song.

So did you just get the program? Because this isn't horrible, there just seems to be no advanced editing, like mastering or anything ((though the fade in of the synth volume was pretty cool :) ))

I would suggest editing the crap out of the drum samples, they sound to basic and general ye know what I mean? They need more life to them, more oomph on the bass kick, more like... reverb maybe be the best way to say on the hats and such.

I would also suggest a bass line, those are always nice. This is completely lacking in that area :)

Maybe an instrument actually playing a melody or something too, that is a good thing.

Try to play with the sounds you have, the best way to make something good, is to make it your own, take a sound and make it how you want it to sound, that way it isn't the exact same sounds as other beginning FL Studio users who don't know what their doing ((YET!!))

So, good luck! And nice work on the composing :) ADD STUFF :D!!

DJLIVEWIRE responds:

Thanks for the response! the reason why the song seems to be lacking is because i am currently using the trial version of FL Studios, so i wont be able to save. But, i will be posting an updated version quite soon.