Oh my :o!
This is excellent! The main bass could use a little tweaking (maybe a lot...) But otherwise this is really good! The melodies throughout are amazing! The only problem I have with this track is that the background sounds are a little off sounding, or just not edited enough to fully counterpart the EPIC!!!!!! Melody choices.
Great work! Seriously, epic. Just the editing of the lower sounds and this could be perfect :o!!
Thank you my friend!
Why?
... just... why?
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WHY!?
Change the main synth
The main synth running through the whole thing is too loud, and raspy. It needs a more full drum sample, so some hat and claps in there, maybe another running hat to fill in sound.
A bass line would be awesome, some pad maybe too. (The one that comes in about a minute and twenty seconds is alright, too soft and drowned out by the main synth)
this does have a TON of potential, just completely under done. Needs a lot of stuff to it.
the main thing you need to do is add a limiter to the main master channel, that way nothing will blast over and burn the ear drums. Then you need to drastically drop the sound, and maybe change out completely the main synth used. Add a bunch more drum samples to fill in the beat so it isn't just the constant boom boom boom boom. which sometimes works, but not all on its own through an entire 3 minute song ;)
I say this to help you out, I am in no way bashing your work or trying to make you feel like you suck, because this could be really good. It is just missing a lot of key ingredients ;)
Thank you. I am always looking for constructive criticism. And I just listened to the song from this website. I was unaware the EQ was messed up. It sounded fine coming from iTunes. The unfortunate thing is that my PC crashed and I lost the data for this song. I have tried reconstructing it, but I have been unable to. Also if you want to hear my newest tracks you can visit my myspace: http://www.myspace.com/x-killanrg Also you download my tracks at either http://soundcloud.com/search?q[fullte xt]=x-killa or at http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defau lt.cfm?bandID=754487&content=widgets. I know my music is usually repetitive, but I am getting better, I think.
The beat?
Everything in this song is amazing, though a lot of the main synths could use some tweaking and adjusting with affects and stuff. But my only main problem is the beat, it isn't the normal beat you would hear with techno and electronic music. It is an awesome beat! Just not so Techno like.
Great work though! I love the sounds ;)
Yeah, I'm pretty fixated on hip-hop and trip-hop, force of habit.
Intro = Amazing
The bass around :40 was pretty freaking awesome as well :)!!
I would have used a different beat since it is Techno and all. And the little piano ending was a little harsh, so mainly just a little edit work on the instruments, and a more techno electornic beat (This was a little too hip hopish or something lol.)
Great song!
It was supposed to come off as trip-hop.
Oh wow >_<!
I recognize a lot of the sounds, and you used them far better than I >_< LOL
I am guessing a lot of sytrus was used ne? The main melody was awesome! I could definitely imagine Penguins dancing around to this ;)
The only thing really is the second melody used is a little sharp and raspy for the theme, but it still sounds wonderful!
Around 1:48 area and on, that melody had one note in it that really kind of made the center fall apart, ONLY reason I didn't vote 10/10.
So over all amazing job! Just gotta remember what key your in, and maybe a tiny bit of edit work on the main instruments, make them a little more full.
^-^! Awesome job!
Thanks dude!! Yeah that note around 1:48 is a bluesy note, and i use it a lot in other styles... i couldn't resist.
I'm glad you liked the melody. I was worried it was too boring.
Thanks for the review!
ps. the lead synth was the 3x osc
lol
i do believe you've left me so many reviews i owe you a few now. :P
I love fast piano!
This is awesome! Excellent work combining the drum sounds with the piano melody and what not! This has good loop quality to it, like a video game type theme. Could totally see this being played while on a selection screen of some type.
Great work!
Thanks a lot for the review! I agree, what I have been making in FLStudio all sounds like video game music! Please check out my other mixes, see what else you like.
Piano = <3
Alright! Piano is epic with Dance! Though I have to say at 1:00, its just all like... "Woot! Party!" I was just going to say it needed some electro synth to make it a little harder, but then there it was! So obviously you know what your doing lol.
Yet another awesome work!!
Yeah. The first time around I didn't have the synth, but upon listening to it again, I heard it was missing something.
Thanks for the review,
Digital Pulse
Finally someone else who loves the bass kick!!
Dude you know where its at with that kick ^_~
I don't make very much House, because it is too hard for me lol, but this has made me want to find more lol, I hope you post the final version here!! I was so sad at the end of the loop... (had to listen again LOL)
Good work here! (ESPECIALLY the kick!! woot!)
I like the kick also, but it's to loud. I might end up finishing this song, but I doubt I'll be posting it on NG.
Thanks for the review,
Digital Pulse
that's gross.
Not something I would ever consider showing my brothers, even the ones who are 15 and up.
Seriously, I thought you made music?
Man, im sorry! Well its called Zoey gets boned so, i guess you shouldnt have picked this one...... The others arent as inapproriate. This is really for the teenagers anyway, im sorry about upseting you.
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