Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Noma]

Very relaxing :)!

Yeah, the sound is low, and the synths sound a little ordinary. BUT THIS IS JUST SO FREAKING AWESOME!

Great job! I wish you would post more ;) This seriously is really good song writing!

jennex responds:

Thanks for the review! I'll try to keep up the pace!

[Gerudo of the Death-RMXLinkfan]

Good times...

Piano could use some reverb or effects to it, sounds to clipped ye know? Just my thoughts, not sure if you wanted it that way (thus the 910 still lol)

Over all score writing is just amazing!

Only suggestion, THIS NEEDS BEAT! Like drums and stuff, even if just a shaker and some hats and what not, otherwise, this is an amazing mix! Great job for sure!

linkfanzeldamario responds:

I don't want some percusion in that remix =o sorry ! But thanks ^^.

[The Pleonasm]

Really good!

Everything the other review stated is true. This needs afew more instruments to it, maybe a stronger main melody piece? And a stronger kick would be cool lol.

The mastering and editing of effects was amazing and all good. Though this could definitely use a little more sound to it, so another background pad maybe, and some harmony? Careful with that though, it's easy to demolish a song with a crappy harmony.

Great work!! Really ^-^!

paradimensional responds:

Cool :D thanks for the review dude

[Penguin Melody #1]

Glad I checked this out!

I loved the V2 so much I had to find the first one, and I dunno, I think I might like this one more :o!

It doesn't give off as much of the penguin like ice world vibe, but it is still a wonderful song with an amazing melody!

You used affects pretty well too! I am surprised at this XD Over all though I really think this is amazing. Great work!

Falloffenix responds:

thank you once again. i'll have yo check your stuff out now. lol

[Cataclysm (Trancefreak)]

Oh my :o!

This is excellent! The main bass could use a little tweaking (maybe a lot...) But otherwise this is really good! The melodies throughout are amazing! The only problem I have with this track is that the background sounds are a little off sounding, or just not edited enough to fully counterpart the EPIC!!!!!! Melody choices.

Great work! Seriously, epic. Just the editing of the lower sounds and this could be perfect :o!!

Euphy responds:

Thank you my friend!

[A Bit Repetitive Pt 2]

Why?

... just... why?

LiNaK37 responds:

Fighting crime with a partner
Lois Lane Jimmy Carter
WHY!?

[5th Attempt_2.mp3]

Change the main synth

The main synth running through the whole thing is too loud, and raspy. It needs a more full drum sample, so some hat and claps in there, maybe another running hat to fill in sound.

A bass line would be awesome, some pad maybe too. (The one that comes in about a minute and twenty seconds is alright, too soft and drowned out by the main synth)

this does have a TON of potential, just completely under done. Needs a lot of stuff to it.

the main thing you need to do is add a limiter to the main master channel, that way nothing will blast over and burn the ear drums. Then you need to drastically drop the sound, and maybe change out completely the main synth used. Add a bunch more drum samples to fill in the beat so it isn't just the constant boom boom boom boom. which sometimes works, but not all on its own through an entire 3 minute song ;)

I say this to help you out, I am in no way bashing your work or trying to make you feel like you suck, because this could be really good. It is just missing a lot of key ingredients ;)

X-KillaNRG responds:

Thank you. I am always looking for constructive criticism. And I just listened to the song from this website. I was unaware the EQ was messed up. It sounded fine coming from iTunes. The unfortunate thing is that my PC crashed and I lost the data for this song. I have tried reconstructing it, but I have been unable to. Also if you want to hear my newest tracks you can visit my myspace: http://www.myspace.com/x-killanrg Also you download my tracks at either http://soundcloud.com/search?q[fullte xt]=x-killa or at http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defau lt.cfm?bandID=754487&content=widgets. I know my music is usually repetitive, but I am getting better, I think.

[Starlight (IB)]

The beat?

Everything in this song is amazing, though a lot of the main synths could use some tweaking and adjusting with affects and stuff. But my only main problem is the beat, it isn't the normal beat you would hear with techno and electronic music. It is an awesome beat! Just not so Techno like.

Great work though! I love the sounds ;)

Intelligible-Blur responds:

Yeah, I'm pretty fixated on hip-hop and trip-hop, force of habit.

[Coming to a Conclusion]

Intro = Amazing

The bass around :40 was pretty freaking awesome as well :)!!

I would have used a different beat since it is Techno and all. And the little piano ending was a little harsh, so mainly just a little edit work on the instruments, and a more techno electornic beat (This was a little too hip hopish or something lol.)

Great song!

Intelligible-Blur responds:

It was supposed to come off as trip-hop.

[Penguin Melody #2]

Oh wow >_<!

I recognize a lot of the sounds, and you used them far better than I >_< LOL

I am guessing a lot of sytrus was used ne? The main melody was awesome! I could definitely imagine Penguins dancing around to this ;)

The only thing really is the second melody used is a little sharp and raspy for the theme, but it still sounds wonderful!

Around 1:48 area and on, that melody had one note in it that really kind of made the center fall apart, ONLY reason I didn't vote 10/10.

So over all amazing job! Just gotta remember what key your in, and maybe a tiny bit of edit work on the main instruments, make them a little more full.

^-^! Awesome job!

Falloffenix responds:

Thanks dude!! Yeah that note around 1:48 is a bluesy note, and i use it a lot in other styles... i couldn't resist.
I'm glad you liked the melody. I was worried it was too boring.
Thanks for the review!
ps. the lead synth was the 3x osc
lol

i do believe you've left me so many reviews i owe you a few now. :P