Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Techno New Age Unnamed Song]

Where is the techno bass kick? :) ?

A few notes were seeming a little off, like, not wrong key, but because of the shifting I wasn't able to tell the defined theme of this song, like was it supposed to be a happy uplifting, or slow and mellow, or sad and such? And just no exact "OH MY GOSH!" Moment you know?

Over all it is pretty dang good and I can see this going somewhere :)

Suggestions would be to have a MUCH harder bass kick, and a more defined beat in general, some more instrument variation, and some variation to the over all melody/harmony and what not, Also a bass line would be nice ;) Especially since this is part techno you say?

As for a name, I would think of something spacey and kind of star wars or star trek like, like Nova Epoch, or something like that lol, just my lame 2 cents right there, I suck at naming things XD

Thanks for the upload :D

Pizzaroma responds:

Thanks for your input. I guess it doesn't really have much techno influence at all, so I'll have to rename it ;)

[DJ Chaos- Imagination]

Has a kind of House feel to it :)

Which by NO means is bad.

Kind of boring at 1:00 until the rest comes in again, I would suggest not doing that ;)

The beat seams a bit empty, like it could use some variation, some hats maybe? A nice little off beat tick would be cool :) A steady bass line could help a lot too.

The two things I heard almost nothing of it the Bass line, And a pad of some type to hold it together.

did the Blank thing again at 2:06, Try not to do that ;)

Though the reversed Crash was pretty cool, I would suggest adding a slight delay and some phaser to it, that way it doesn't cut off so harsh. Again, needing a bass line to fill in the blank space around the beat in that area.

So over all this is fun :) Sounds a little House like.

Things that need to be there ((added))

A Bass line

Some type of Pad? ((optional of course))

More to the beat, a hi hat or snare or something to make it more interesting.

A variation to the melody and harmony line, they repeat a lot, and for a 6 minute song that isn't such a good thing (For a 3 minute it wouldn't be bad :) )

Good job!

Darkfire96 responds:

i see!
well i thank you for your honest review, but pads really arent my style.
For the lenth, i actually gor carried away a bit, and just kept going after 3 minutes. My bad XD. The empty parts were for listeners to register what just happened.
I probably should've put it in house. Beat variation isnt my thing, because im really a techno person, but living near people who like hip hop would influence me in a way that i would not like. But ill see what i can come up with in the next song. The reverse crash was to not make it so cliche as to when you hear some good songs u always hear something at the end of it, and i wasnt going for cliche. But if it would make my song better, i can add a better reverse crash. The melody is really steady until the end for a reason. I dont know, but i remember i had a reason. Also, this was started probably 5 months ago, and never finished it. Ill add a snare in it next time if it fits it, so look forward to it. I really thank you for your honest oppinion, but i think the score is a little high because my song really isnt that great.

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

[Desperate to Find You]

Amazing song!

I love the panning in the beginning :D

The score and composition was all awesome as well! Great work! Got some fun background synths, The only thing is the beat change around 1 is a little odd, not horrible or anything, just not sure I care for that part lol.

The whole song itself is really good! like, wow :o... AWESOME work indeed!

Naoki-Reisen responds:

Thank you!

[>>Heavenly Remix<<]

Make it much longer!!

At least another minute and ten seconds :p...

Good choice of synth :)

Semaphore responds:

thanks =D

[Far From Your World]

STRONGER KICK!!

But I always say that XD

This isn't hip hop either :o So I am actually glad I found it lol, this is really promising, especially for your first of this genre right? Keep up the work, not too much else to complain for a first try :)

Ayeso responds:

I WAS ALL DRUNK WHEN I MADE IT THATS Y NONE OF THIS STUFF MAKES SENSE BUT IT IS MY FIRST RAVE SONG THO. THANKS I REALLY APPRECIATE IT

[8bit Mic Test]

LMFAOFL

The song is awesome, a little empty, even for a chip tune, could use an arpeggio synth or something lol.

The voice is what kills it, needs a little more editing of it. The voice is a little overpowering. And doesn't really fit the song, but I am sure you know that, if the lyrics are real XD.

good work!

Iwannahamster responds:

THANK YOU FOR ALL THE LETTERS YOU PUT ON MY COMPUTER SCREEN. HOW DID YOU GET ON MY COMPUTER ALL THE WAY FROM YOUR COMPUTER!?!?

WHAT DO YOU MEAN THAT THE VOICE NEEDS EDITING? I SPENT 9 HOURS EDITING IN MSPAINT.

[Threshold[TIVQ]]

Hm....

Not too sure if this deserved a low 6, but he is right. It is kind of monotonous. The beat is a little weak as well, and there isn't much for change up. (Which isn't horrible, most of my stuff is ultra repetitive, so no worries there if that's what you like ;) )

I don't know how long you have been doing music either, but this is not horrible, and a noob definitely would not be making music of this quality. (compliment.) I would suggest NOT flooding the song with so many effects, usually I am screaming to crank the effects, but in this case, it kills the drums and background synths. I think you need to do some work on mastering ;)

Good job ^_^!

timesavectorquantity responds:

Thanks for the advice :D
And yeah, I had some trouble mastering it, I'm working on it right now actually XD As for the effects I may try taking the global flanger I used XD

[TiK ToK (Seversky HxC Remix)]

XD Amazing.

I didn't think this song could ever become enjoyable until this, Thank you! LOL

Xayro responds:

Hah. Thanks! Glad I made it tolerable.

[Russia Privjet (Seversky 2009)]

Oh my gosh!

Oh wow :o

I tried remaking this song, but I think I made it too fast lol. (Kept it boosting at 150 BPM XD)

This is a really good job! Nice synth choice and everything! The orchestral beginning was really awesome too, that was very well done ;)

And then you get even better when you blend the two styles >_<!! GREAT WORK!

Xayro responds:

Hah. Thank you. I hope this good review stream doesn't stop XD My life is being made infinitesimally better.

[-= Caped Crusader =-]

Awesome!

Really great work! I don't listen to too much dub, so I am not sure how to rate XD But you definitely inspired me to try making a loop of dubstep LOL.

Thanks ;)

TheBiocide responds:

No, thank YOU my good, man!
Glad I could inspire ya :)