Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Shame of Living]

There ye go :)

This is awesome :)

Thanks!!

InclinedInEverything responds:

Thanks dude

[Hobbit Trance (demo)]

ya yike!

Finish, it is almost cruel to post something so great as only a demo XD

Awesome work!

ThunderBeats responds:

haha, thank you :) I recently uploaded the finished version! It's called "Hobbit Trance" (surprise surprise)

[matabei (psytrance)]

Very interesting lol

I never listen to psy trance, so I am not sure what I am supposed to be looking for XD

Though, I did enjoy this a lot, so great job! The only reason no 10/10 was because some of the sounds seemed a little wild ((not mastered properly)) But other than that, great work :)

Shmi responds:

yeah i know what you mean. i kinda suck at mastering, so i really need to practice on that part. it´s nice you liked it though, thanks a lot!

[-Fountain Of Youth- [FULL]]

Very nice :)

Sounds very familiar, but refreshing :)

Great job!

lackofintelligence responds:

Thank you! :]

[Depressing Piano Loop]

Full feature song?

This could easily become something MUCH more!

Adding in some string ensembles after the basic intro, a little more variation here and there after a minute or so, some effects, maybe a cello in the background? Who knows, but this is honestly wonderful :)

I wouldn't so much consider this depressing, but more of longing, you know? But you wrote it, you would know, and this is wonderful! Love it!

InclinedInEverything responds:

Just made what you said tell me what you think, the title is "The shame of living"

[Star Trek :: Voyager Theme]

I am a MAJOR TRECKY!

Only seen like every episode of every season of every show :D!!!

This was pretty dang accurate, I would suggest somehow finding the Plugin Purity, if you use some kind of program that runs VST's that is.

This was still pretty amazing, I would only suggest making the toms/drums a lot louder, they seemed kind of drowned out by the brass :)

Great work! ((The initial brass was really sharp and pluckish, maybe some editing?))

Azure-sky responds:

Thanks a lot for the advice :)
I am actually familiar with Purity, but I don't own it myself xD

I agree with the initial brass, I'll see what I can do, its much softer than that isn't it? My bad :P
Louder timps? You got it :)

[Techno New Age Unnamed Song]

Where is the techno bass kick? :) ?

A few notes were seeming a little off, like, not wrong key, but because of the shifting I wasn't able to tell the defined theme of this song, like was it supposed to be a happy uplifting, or slow and mellow, or sad and such? And just no exact "OH MY GOSH!" Moment you know?

Over all it is pretty dang good and I can see this going somewhere :)

Suggestions would be to have a MUCH harder bass kick, and a more defined beat in general, some more instrument variation, and some variation to the over all melody/harmony and what not, Also a bass line would be nice ;) Especially since this is part techno you say?

As for a name, I would think of something spacey and kind of star wars or star trek like, like Nova Epoch, or something like that lol, just my lame 2 cents right there, I suck at naming things XD

Thanks for the upload :D

Pizzaroma responds:

Thanks for your input. I guess it doesn't really have much techno influence at all, so I'll have to rename it ;)

[DJ Chaos- Imagination]

Has a kind of House feel to it :)

Which by NO means is bad.

Kind of boring at 1:00 until the rest comes in again, I would suggest not doing that ;)

The beat seams a bit empty, like it could use some variation, some hats maybe? A nice little off beat tick would be cool :) A steady bass line could help a lot too.

The two things I heard almost nothing of it the Bass line, And a pad of some type to hold it together.

did the Blank thing again at 2:06, Try not to do that ;)

Though the reversed Crash was pretty cool, I would suggest adding a slight delay and some phaser to it, that way it doesn't cut off so harsh. Again, needing a bass line to fill in the blank space around the beat in that area.

So over all this is fun :) Sounds a little House like.

Things that need to be there ((added))

A Bass line

Some type of Pad? ((optional of course))

More to the beat, a hi hat or snare or something to make it more interesting.

A variation to the melody and harmony line, they repeat a lot, and for a 6 minute song that isn't such a good thing (For a 3 minute it wouldn't be bad :) )

Good job!

Darkfire96 responds:

i see!
well i thank you for your honest review, but pads really arent my style.
For the lenth, i actually gor carried away a bit, and just kept going after 3 minutes. My bad XD. The empty parts were for listeners to register what just happened.
I probably should've put it in house. Beat variation isnt my thing, because im really a techno person, but living near people who like hip hop would influence me in a way that i would not like. But ill see what i can come up with in the next song. The reverse crash was to not make it so cliche as to when you hear some good songs u always hear something at the end of it, and i wasnt going for cliche. But if it would make my song better, i can add a better reverse crash. The melody is really steady until the end for a reason. I dont know, but i remember i had a reason. Also, this was started probably 5 months ago, and never finished it. Ill add a snare in it next time if it fits it, so look forward to it. I really thank you for your honest oppinion, but i think the score is a little high because my song really isnt that great.

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

[Desperate to Find You]

Amazing song!

I love the panning in the beginning :D

The score and composition was all awesome as well! Great work! Got some fun background synths, The only thing is the beat change around 1 is a little odd, not horrible or anything, just not sure I care for that part lol.

The whole song itself is really good! like, wow :o... AWESOME work indeed!

Naoki-Reisen responds:

Thank you!

[>>Heavenly Remix<<]

Make it much longer!!

At least another minute and ten seconds :p...

Good choice of synth :)

Semaphore responds:

thanks =D