Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wahoo]

Not Techno, or anything similar.

This is just one sound effect playing twice :/ not even that impressive to be honest.

[Evolving Atmosphere]

This isn't Techno.

it's more Ambient :/ And phsycsboy is right, it isn't the best, not even close :p

[Like Woha- Dank]

Lol really?

your loathing comments don't make up for the fact that your attempts at music is still nothing more than a bunch of uncreative rendering of sample libraries and presets from a rompler.

Also, your comments on other people's works are just pathetic and rude, without any form of useful criticism whatsoever. You contribute nothing to the newgrounds audio portal, save for the constant complaining and bashing of other artists who just happen to be bellow the standard of professional artists.

If someone was a professional artist, they wouldn't be wasting their time here loading tracks that can not even be rendered at a high quality rate, this is for people to load experiments and ideas and stuff they are working on in hopes of gaining useful experience and insight from other artists who possibly use the same program.

What you do it s mockery to the portal and to musicians worldwide. Nobody cares how awesome you think you are, or how much you think you know about music production, because I have never read a useful comment from you, nor one that was even worth reading.

Now instead of being a such a complaining little girl, you should grow up and realize that the audio portal doesn't give a rat's bald end what you have to contribute, however little that could be on a good day. Figure out how to give actual feedback that could possibly be useful, if even just commenting on a volume knob, instead of just running around the portal with your 'I am so much better than everyone because I can torrent sounds and put them in a two minute mp3' attitude that just makes you look like every other 10 year old boy who thinks he is a serious musician because he posted a file on newgrounds for 'the whole world to listen'.

And so, Mr. green apple. Take this very serious criticism, from one aspiring musician to what I believe you wish to be is a musician as well. You will get NOWHERE with the attitude you have, and your career will stay stagnant and rotting in the audio portal unless you grow up and realize the world doesn't really care about what you are doing, and when you act like a jerk, it will just shut you out like a diseased animal.

Good luck, and read this, it might actually do you some good.

As for the song, it sounds just like everything else you ever made, same samples, same instruments, probably even the same song I am too lazy to go check. Not very creative, and somewhere in there is a very off note. Just sayin, might want to check that out.

Mr-green-apple responds:

man i was laughing the whole time i wrote that shit. i knew you would get pissed bwhahahahaha. i cant believe you still trolling my account. im not here to say im better than anyone... i know there is a lot more talented ppl here on the audio portal than me. I dunno if you realized but selling music is a joke a becoming a proffesional muscian is the most retarded thing you could do with your life. you wouldnt know that cuz your fucking hella incompetent. no one buys music. only reason a musician should make money is if they throw shows to entertain ppl. i think the audio portal is a great forum to put music up on but its trolls like you that ruin it cuz you come and blam shit cuz its better than your wana be creative shit. get out of here you cancerous fucking undesirable

[On your bass [electro-house]]

Heres a comment.

Heres a critz.

You are welcome ;) lol

And in all seriousness, this isn't such a bad song, just lacking in over-all excitement honestly. Just missing that something to make it super awesome and pumping ye know? It gets close towards the end, but over all its kind of draggin just a bit.

Potential is there though :)

[just another loop]

cool :D

Next time try putting more emphasis on the drums and do some mastering on the lead so it sounds more clear, that would make it sound better I think ;p

Otherwise not bad :)

[On The Floor(R) - Mr. KaOs]

Bass junkey indeed xD

this is blasting lol, great job! I'm not usually into music with vocals, though this one is not too bad :) Nice remix!

SteveKaOs responds:

Thanks a lot man. I am definitely a bass junky haha

[Intro - Inside My Mind]

Just needs the rest of the song!

Make sure to let me know when it is finished so I can hear the whole thing ;)

djresset responds:

okey im working on the song

[Tripin]

Not Dance

The crash Effect was way too loud and drowned everything.

this isn't even Dance genre, and it was really just irritating :/

Master your stuff so it doesn't sound like a 9 year old kid made it.

Mr-green-apple responds:

you make me laugh kid get better headphones scrub

[What now(Dj Sasson)]

The mastering is really bad :/

The sounds are all fighting over each other, the lead especially is way to loud.

And again, this isn't even a loop, so you should really consider either making these attempts at loops loop, or just quit putting them in the loop section.

And Mastering is important, you never do master anything and it causes sounds to get out of control and suck :/

Mr-green-apple responds:

get outa here hahaha ur garbage bro