Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love's First True Sight]

For sad-face

The kick and the song was way out of timing :/ What program do you use? Because this needs some help I'm afraid v_v

TechnicolourNuance responds:

Hahahah yeahh, I know.
It was a program on my friends comp, not sure which, but I could always ask. I wasn't sure how to align the melody with the kick- it was really weird. But that aside, is the melody decent? I was thinkinng have that melody stay consistent throughout the entire thing, softer volume as it changes the octave and add a transitional harmony then go straight into the end melody. Any ideas how that may work?

Ayways, thanks for your input :3

[FF Prelude WIP]

For techno?

For techno I would suggest boosting the BPM up a TON from where it's at. IT should be at least at 130 or 160. A stronger kick for sure, and some type of bass other than the part of the scale thing that follows the main lead. And maybe an actual melody instead of just a scale would be cool :p

[A Castalian Avalon]

Must say...

I don't like any of the parts Castaliankittenn told you to add, they sound nasty and kill the song :/

So, you did a great job :) But the DIST guitar thing totally kills the best parts :p In my unpro opinion.

Avalonkittenn responds:

The funny part about it, is that I disliked that, too. (DON'T TELL CASTALIAN I SAID THAT). xDD

But, yeah. I completely agree. The Dist Guitar could be replaced with a different instrument, maybe a more warmer one... That's what I feel for. Man.. that does sound icky. But I DO like the breakdown. (:

Thank you for your feedback, anyhow! :D

[Elecman's Stage (Remix)]

LOL cunning XD

Like anyone on this website knows anything Xp (Well, maybe like seven people)

Towards the end I kind of lost interest, maybe could shorten it up, or even turn it into a loop? Because I like this game, and song ;)

Great job though!

Birdinator99 responds:

Yea, long endings seem to be somewhat of a standard thing that gets added on to most of my songs, sigh... not always a good thing.

Glad you liked it for the most part, though. Thank you!

[DJ TastyTeo - Scare]

Almost sounds VG-ish for a while :D

for a fifth song this is pretty good :O Like, wow skill!

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TastyTeo responds:

Thank you my friend!! :D Check out my new stuff!

[(Dj-Admin)Stuck]

Sound originality wasn't that great.

The musicality was awesome, but as far as making your own sounds, eh... could try to be more original on that aspect. But hey this is really good :) Keep up the work! And just a hint, do try and make sounds more your own style instead of just suing the plugins presented to you, it makes your works more special ;)

Djadmin responds:

I've been experimenting with altering plugs. Listen to glass jungle, just finished it.

[Canned Adrenaline]

Good job :)

Tips: Don't pan anything. It sounds like the arp in the beginning is panned to the right, and it really gets irritating really fast. I know it's VG genre, but please don't do this to your work, it would be so much better without panning, for real.

Also it could have been a little shorter, this way it doesn't feel so super repetitive after a while :)

So, not bad :)

[Rehash]

Really long for a loop o.O

But it's pretty awesome :) Definitely could see this being used in a video game.

mrmcduts responds:

Hey thanks! XD