Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[i kno sumthn]

Nye...

ya nye ponimayu... eta nye interyesnaya muzika.. nyet, eta nye muzika. Tak uzhasno.

[From The Start [FP]]

Woot!

Something good to listen to ;D

The kick at :50 something is a little muddy, but thats the only thing in the whole track that I would even bother working in :D

Great job!

FlightPattern responds:

Hazaa! A review :)

I agree the kick could use a little work

[speed pong.]

Like the other one.

Stop with the panning.

Liau responds:

panning makes the sound go round ;)

[Swing that Pong]

That... isn't ok.

Why do people always use panning? It's painful and annoying done this way <.< There is a time and place for panning, but constant one ear rape is NOT it. So because of the panning, I am not happy with this track, even though it does actually have potential.

STOP THE PANNING!! It isn't awesome.

Liau responds:

cool bro.

[Industree]

Yup, crappy drum beat.

Really, don't be so eager to upload something that you post random crap like everyone else, it really isn't worth it. Because then people like me who review all the time will be disappointed and want to just flame the juice out of this kind of works.

Make an actual beat, one that has rhythm and is actually good to listen to, then make a melody with some bass that follows over it. And since this is industrial maybe use a more distorted guitar sound with a stronger under bass (which was hard to hear) Keep trying, put more effort into the next time before uploading alright?

Ethmiester responds:

I would appriciate the constructive critisism in any other circumstance.
Unfortunately, I actually DID think that this was good enough to put up on here. I didn't just pull some random shit together and throw it on here. I was just screwin' around, and I managed to make something that sounded ever so slightly cool. Cool enough to upload, atleast.

And god, must you talk about how to make a good beat? I know how.
I've done it.
Many times.

[[Dj-U] Long Gone(Original Mix)]

Wow :O

Lots of jealous hip-hop obsessives found you :O

This is great work!! ((Remember, meaningful reviews are what to pay attention to, not bull crap scores ;) ))

Thanks for sharing!

Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

jeeeezzz i dont doubt it =\

Thanks for the kind words it truly means a lot =] although i might reupload it to get a fairer score but then again, i probably wont ^^

[Test Melody #1: Part 2]

Awesome :D

The melody is strong and sounds great, just a little too loud, the bass is a little too soft and kind of killed by everything else (needs a lower octave too maybe)

All in all this is good :D keep working at it!

xArktisFlamex responds:

Thank you very much! :D

I agree, I think the melody is a little too loud also. Thanks again :D

[Sunrise in Warmwave City]

Ah... excellence in MP3 format.

When that beat came in, I was all over this sucka!! lol

No but really, this was classic ;) Great work!! Thanks for the memory trip ^-^

td6d responds:

Yo, thanks for the feedback! No problem, I like to make people trip :D

[[Z] Squall [Z]]

Not bad ;D

The piano intro was boss ;D And I absolutely love that kick lol, but is the arp supposed to be the bassline? If so I think it should be a little lower, and if not then a bassline needs to be created >_<

This is darn good though :D

KI1 responds:

I totally forgot abou the bassline... Oops. Yeah, it does sound like it needs it >_<
Anyways, thanks for your positive review :D

[Megana!]

Hm... interesting

Though kind of a sissy beat for techno :/

Louder bass, louder kick, maybe some hat and clap, make an actual beat for it ei? Get it pumping, umph cha umph cha umph cha!!!

Not bad start though :b

madnessassault responds:

lol the beat is supposed to be minimal :P and its not realy techno, but NG doesnt have a rave or experimental genre. >.>