:/ hm...
I love the sounds and everything, but the melody and everything as far as notes go, is really, REALLY off. There is not really a definable key signature, which makes it kind of annoying to listen to after a while :/
All the sounds are there and everything, but there needs to be a solid key signature, otherwise it sounds like a really bad conglomeration of notes ((or a melody you copied and shifted up a few notes causing half of the song to be out of key))
Just a heads up.
What is the 'message' ?
Because if it's what I think it is, this is terrible :p
But I like the beginning commercial part.
the message is that no one on the corner has swagger like him, not that hard 2 understand
Still pro!
Where as I am still jealous xD
Great stuff man!
This is really great :D~
Nice and peaceful yet flowing and energetic :) This is really great!
Only thing I would really change is to kind of push for a stronger bass throughout the song, it's not too bad after about 1:45, but it needs more I think ;) and a stronger kick ((or, it actually needs a kick lol, don't think I can really hear one even, this can happen when your bass line and your kick use the same frequency, which can easily be fixed with an EQ 2))
Great work :D
Trippy intro lol
Not that bad, but it kind of lacks excitement for the first while, making it a little hard to be patient and wait for the goodies. But not bad :D
The reviews are right about the 'key'
It's very important to make sure the song has a definable key so the notes don't 'battle' each other. And for an electronic song it would be cool to have a stronger beat ;)
The main instrument, volume wise, drowns out a lot of the other parts of the song too. I am still working with volume control too, but it's really important not to have anything superior to the entire track, otherwise it just gets an interesting (usually not so good) sound.
Love the fx though :D! I can tell there is some deadmou5 influence in this for sure :) Good job!
Wow :D
I never get tired of 8 Bit works!
And I have no idea what you could ad to make this better :O Though I am a huge fan of loops, so edit the end in a way that makes it loopable and that would be cool ;)
But for a whole song, not sure what else could be done :O But I am not really good at 8 bit lol
Haha, thanks for the input. It's really appreciated. I may make a loopable version and upload it, and also make a full song version. Thanks for the rating too :D
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