Eh, nothing special.
First thing: Very annoying vocals that aren't mastered to fit the track at all. Plus "Chrome to your dome" just doesn't fit anything in general :/ and is annoying as... the most annoying thing imaginable, attempt to be creative for once and think of something.
Second thing: This is supposed to be a loop? It doesn't loop at all, so as far as loops go its garbage.
Third thing: Anybody ((And I've done it, so its true ANYBODY)) Can put a kick drum ((since your using illegally acquired Vengeance sounds you have millions to choose from)) with a simple bass off beat. The least you could have done is added some extra flair to the percussion, instead of just layering one or two sound effects here and there.
Last: The arp was boring and the phase of it was kind of irritating, should maybe find something that fits the track a little more.
Oh! And extra hint. Spend more than an hour on any given track and you might make something interesting. And if you spend more than that and still make stuff like this ((or your other works, bad...)) then maybe music just isn't for you :/