Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pawa [Trancecore] Preview]

If you don't go on I will suffocate my pet rock.

And it will not be pretty, so please do finish it!!

Suggestions: STRONGER KICK AND BASS!!! Please?

Other than that its perfect :D!! Great job, keep going!

Trancecore responds:

ok but leave the pet in peace :P

[diabetes]

What am I supposed to rate this on??

Cannot find nothing wrong with it? Is that a double negative meaning cant find anything good with it?

Or maybe I just don't understand the genre.

ZX responds:

treysen listen

fucking kil me honestly send a missile to my house PLEASE i am not joking my only purpose for uploading this was for you to find it and eliminate me

[Feels So Good]

Dang :O

I find it funny how all the best stop in the audio portal has a score somewhere in the 3 or 4 XD Or lower <.<

Anyway, great work! Do you have the full version now? If so I cant wait to hear some of the stuff you will be making :D

noobieboobie responds:

yeah i have the full version. i'm gonna post my new stuff soon so i'll let you know for sure when its up. my new stuff is way better than this too i'm excited to see how people like it.

[Technology (BooBlock)]

Wow, not bad :D

The weird sounding synth at :30 scared me for a minute, but it blended alright after a moment, just watch out for those ;)

The voice was a little annoying though, and didn't fit very well. . .

1:12 was really interesting lol XD I kind of liked it but it was very strange for sure, new style or something going on.

Just watch that voice, the song would be even better without it in my opinion.

Thanks for the load :D

BooBlock responds:

Thanks a lot :D

[live {DU}]

Two random downloaders say they do like it.

The beat with the hat is a little annoying, the intro with the 'donk donk donk donk' got really annoying pretty fast, but once it started changing up it wasn't too bad. Maybe get a stronger kick and a more defined bass line that is also more dance/techno sounding.

But the biggest beef I have with this is the beat, needs to change somehow yeah? Or different samples, it gets really annoying really quick, just my opinion.

Otherwise great job for a first attempt :O...

decoyultimatum responds:

ya i agree totally wheni started to make it i wasent satusfied with itat all but for some reason my computer did something stupid and i had to livewith whati got i couldnt justreload it cause im only using the demo version of the program :( i wanted to do a lot with thisit was gona be really good but its kida bland now im gona have to remake it someday

[Random electronic beat]

I'm not an m-f'er :/

But this track was pretty interesting :)

Could you get a stronger kick next time? One more punchy instead of a fwump fwump? Just what I like to hear in electronic music lol, though the one in this isn't too bad.

A nice accented bass line (preferably side chaining) would be nice too! :)

Very nice feel to it, kind of creepy and dark :) Good job!

Higgins667 responds:

Thanks for the review, I will tweak the fruit kick to what i think you are talking about, and see how it will sound with a bass line :)

[Noname Preview]

The main lead

This was DEFINITELY NOT a zero, so I don't know what the deal with that is.

I don't care much for the main lead though, it gets kind of annoying after a while and is really loud compared to the rest of the song.

There is no bass line :( Why is there no bass line? Add one :D!

So master the volume and fix the whiny-ness of the lead ;)

Good job! ((As for a name, I have no idea XD))

CRomDayLeR responds:

um...there is a bassline, and I can hear it nicely on my subwoofer and on my headset. but probably it could need some more subbass on it.

the main lead is a bit loud, youre right. I will lower the volume, and maybe I will lower the volume overall a bit.

also, I will change the lead a bit more so it doesn´t gets too repetitive or annoying ;3.

thx for the review :D!

[<V>Tetris A+B<V>]

These will never get old to me.

Originality! Finally :D

Intro: Didn't care for the constant panning into the left ear, kind of made me want to stop listening at the beginning.

Middle: Good stuff, but that panning has to stop... please?

Music: Over all I LOVE the melody of these pieces, but towards the middle and end there wasn't much left for originality, so I would suggest to take the original melody and remix it, add some flare, some spice, some of your own creativity, instead of playing it as it originally was, that is no fun after a while.

End: Ended a little suddenly, might want to add some more type of fade, a crash maybe, just something ;) And stop the panning... please stop the panning.

Great work! This was an idea I was thinking about a while ago, but figured I couldn't do it, but you seem to be able to do it good, so keep going! :D ((Kill the panning, please))

veanm responds:

dont worry about the panning, that was my first experiment with it, i made loads of remixes of tetris both A and B so you could have a listen,

thanks for review, and ill stop panning lol

[Open The Eyes Of My Heart Lord]

The intro was death to this song.

I did listen to the whole thing.
But it wasn't terrible. I have to say though 1:14 was my favorite part (When they repeat the same words over and over again it kind of gets irritating and hard to want to keep going.) The echo of the first part of the main part (once it finally came in) Also was a little annoying.

Suggestions!:

House is a genre I have a hard time with, because I know so little about it. But I do know that this is a little slow, the main saw bass is a little loud and drowns out a lot of other sounds, so leveling out would be good.

A good idea would be to make a instrumental to follow the lyrics, instead of a kind of down slow paced part with not much action going on, ye know?

A little faster would be nice, and make the kick a little more pronounced, right now it's like a dead little fwum fwum, which is kind of hard to make out sometimes with the rest of the stuff going on (like that super loud bass saw)

There is no part in this where the whole part of the lyrics plays, it's just little snippits, which isn't like terrible or anything, just kind of disappointing. And going back to my suggestion about an instrumental part of the melody, with a really electronic sounding piano that would be awesome, along side the lyrics, that would do great.

Great start anyway, good job :)

Mans0n responds:

maybe re listen to the song with headphones that have good bass or speakers with good bass. Because the kick is very heavy and deep. And this is an afrojack theme'd remix. Because of the way it builds and transitions. If you were an afrojack fan you would understand im sure.
ohh and the repeating of vocals around 1:14 indicates a build up o.0 very popular method of doing business

And vocals not playing throughout the whole song is no purpose because they dont mesh at all. That's why it builds and breaks like it does. I've already put a lot of thought into this. and no E piano that's very generic haha

[Tetris-A-60sec-left]

Freaking love these songs.

No matter how many times I hear this I always love it!

Not much for originality in this, but it never said it was a remix ;) So great job! ((What program being used?))

frozenburger responds:

Fl Studio 9 :-D