Nice!
I will do this the old fashioned way of having a like list and a dislike list eh ;)
DISLIKE: The screeching background noise, just doesn't sit right with me. The main melody synth could do better than bells I think, I would suggest finding a more synthetic kind of electronic instrument for that ;) the bass was good! Though it would sound cool chopped up, not so much just flat line bass sound ye know? The kick could be a TON stronger and louder, that would help a lot with filling out more sound. The whole song in general is kind of lacking in sound, what is there is REALLY good! It is just missing a lot of background synths and some really good medium to high spectrum melody harmony or whatever. Arps are amazing with this ;) (the bass would sound B.A. with an arp to it (arpeggio)
LIKE: Mostly everything! The bass sound was awesome! just like I said before, could use some chopping up, maybe a gate or arpeggio sound to it ;) The bell melody is really awesome, it is just not as perfect as it could be on another synth. The background screeching is a great idea, but I think it would sound better as another type of sound instead of screeching, but that is just me. The ending part is really awesome! I think that is my favorite part ;) I love the beat, it just needs to be REALLY much much stronger, like at the beginning it is really good, just gets drowned out during the rest of the song when the other sounds come in. Same with the rest of the beat sounds (hat and what not)
Other Comments: The over all piece is great! Just needs some Mastering, adding some effects, making instruments sound deeper and more full, filling in the sound spectrum more making it more of a piece that pulls in peoples attention ye know? Just kind of missing that, OMG I AM HERE!, type of sound that you might hear in more professional main stream techno sounding songs right?
Great job! Really liked it ;)