Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zeon 'M']

Awesome!

I would just say it could use some more mastering of the over all sound of everything, some things seemed a little over powering and other things just not powered enough you know?

But this was amazing!

[Hobbit Trance (demo)]

ya yike!

Finish, it is almost cruel to post something so great as only a demo XD

Awesome work!

ThunderBeats responds:

haha, thank you :) I recently uploaded the finished version! It's called "Hobbit Trance" (surprise surprise)

[matabei (psytrance)]

Very interesting lol

I never listen to psy trance, so I am not sure what I am supposed to be looking for XD

Though, I did enjoy this a lot, so great job! The only reason no 10/10 was because some of the sounds seemed a little wild ((not mastered properly)) But other than that, great work :)

Shmi responds:

yeah i know what you mean. i kinda suck at mastering, so i really need to practice on that part. it´s nice you liked it though, thanks a lot!

[-Fountain Of Youth- [FULL]]

Very nice :)

Sounds very familiar, but refreshing :)

Great job!

lackofintelligence responds:

Thank you! :]

[+- Pathway to Dreams -+]

Review 20 ;) lol

Not like that matters, but ok.

Great work!! I love the arps and what not :) The bass line is pretty awesome too, basic yet affective ;)

Not sure what to tell you except thank you! And awesome job :D

[Depressing Piano Loop]

Full feature song?

This could easily become something MUCH more!

Adding in some string ensembles after the basic intro, a little more variation here and there after a minute or so, some effects, maybe a cello in the background? Who knows, but this is honestly wonderful :)

I wouldn't so much consider this depressing, but more of longing, you know? But you wrote it, you would know, and this is wonderful! Love it!

InclinedInEverything responds:

Just made what you said tell me what you think, the title is "The shame of living"

[AF+T888 - Astral Dream]

FINALLY...

Something in the top five that actually deserves to be there! I am tired of coming to the Audio Portal and being ear raped with stuff that is average at best :p

Thank you! Great work! I would like this to be a finished project seeing as it is still a WIP?

[Star Trek :: Voyager Theme]

I am a MAJOR TRECKY!

Only seen like every episode of every season of every show :D!!!

This was pretty dang accurate, I would suggest somehow finding the Plugin Purity, if you use some kind of program that runs VST's that is.

This was still pretty amazing, I would only suggest making the toms/drums a lot louder, they seemed kind of drowned out by the brass :)

Great work! ((The initial brass was really sharp and pluckish, maybe some editing?))

Azure-sky responds:

Thanks a lot for the advice :)
I am actually familiar with Purity, but I don't own it myself xD

I agree with the initial brass, I'll see what I can do, its much softer than that isn't it? My bad :P
Louder timps? You got it :)

[Tetas]

Pretty dang good :)

I do very much enjoy this :D I personally don't listen to that much HOUSE so I am not sure how useful I can be to you as a reviewer in general, but I will try :)

What this definitely needs is some kind of background pad, it seems a little hollow if you know what I mean?

The initial clap sound is very piercing, maybe master it to be a little softer so it doesn't sound so pronounced when it's just that and the kick at the intro.

I must say about half way through when the extra instruments come in it does get pretty bouncen :) Though there is no definite bassline that I can tell, and that would improve the sound a lot, fill up the spectrum thar ye know?

Over all this is good as I have said, Especially around 2:00 but until then it seems like a drum instrumental, which can get pretty hard to listen to, there needs to be melody and 'music' in the piece you know what I mean?

Hope I helped somewhat :) I did enjoy it!

[Techno New Age Unnamed Song]

Where is the techno bass kick? :) ?

A few notes were seeming a little off, like, not wrong key, but because of the shifting I wasn't able to tell the defined theme of this song, like was it supposed to be a happy uplifting, or slow and mellow, or sad and such? And just no exact "OH MY GOSH!" Moment you know?

Over all it is pretty dang good and I can see this going somewhere :)

Suggestions would be to have a MUCH harder bass kick, and a more defined beat in general, some more instrument variation, and some variation to the over all melody/harmony and what not, Also a bass line would be nice ;) Especially since this is part techno you say?

As for a name, I would think of something spacey and kind of star wars or star trek like, like Nova Epoch, or something like that lol, just my lame 2 cents right there, I suck at naming things XD

Thanks for the upload :D

Pizzaroma responds:

Thanks for your input. I guess it doesn't really have much techno influence at all, so I'll have to rename it ;)