Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DJ Chaos- Imagination]

Has a kind of House feel to it :)

Which by NO means is bad.

Kind of boring at 1:00 until the rest comes in again, I would suggest not doing that ;)

The beat seams a bit empty, like it could use some variation, some hats maybe? A nice little off beat tick would be cool :) A steady bass line could help a lot too.

The two things I heard almost nothing of it the Bass line, And a pad of some type to hold it together.

did the Blank thing again at 2:06, Try not to do that ;)

Though the reversed Crash was pretty cool, I would suggest adding a slight delay and some phaser to it, that way it doesn't cut off so harsh. Again, needing a bass line to fill in the blank space around the beat in that area.

So over all this is fun :) Sounds a little House like.

Things that need to be there ((added))

A Bass line

Some type of Pad? ((optional of course))

More to the beat, a hi hat or snare or something to make it more interesting.

A variation to the melody and harmony line, they repeat a lot, and for a 6 minute song that isn't such a good thing (For a 3 minute it wouldn't be bad :) )

Good job!

Darkfire96 responds:

i see!
well i thank you for your honest review, but pads really arent my style.
For the lenth, i actually gor carried away a bit, and just kept going after 3 minutes. My bad XD. The empty parts were for listeners to register what just happened.
I probably should've put it in house. Beat variation isnt my thing, because im really a techno person, but living near people who like hip hop would influence me in a way that i would not like. But ill see what i can come up with in the next song. The reverse crash was to not make it so cliche as to when you hear some good songs u always hear something at the end of it, and i wasnt going for cliche. But if it would make my song better, i can add a better reverse crash. The melody is really steady until the end for a reason. I dont know, but i remember i had a reason. Also, this was started probably 5 months ago, and never finished it. Ill add a snare in it next time if it fits it, so look forward to it. I really thank you for your honest oppinion, but i think the score is a little high because my song really isnt that great.

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

[Dreamscape - To The Stars]

Love the Intro!

The transition was a little rough, but it pulled through pro-effected ;)

Over all great work! Definitely deserving of top five! (I am disappointed with the top five choices mostly, this is definitely top five worthy)

Only thing I didn't really care for is the panning, it was a little too far to the side, but it was an awesome idea :D

Great song!

[Desperate to Find You]

Amazing song!

I love the panning in the beginning :D

The score and composition was all awesome as well! Great work! Got some fun background synths, The only thing is the beat change around 1 is a little odd, not horrible or anything, just not sure I care for that part lol.

The whole song itself is really good! like, wow :o... AWESOME work indeed!

Naoki-Reisen responds:

Thank you!

[>>Heavenly Remix<<]

Make it much longer!!

At least another minute and ten seconds :p...

Good choice of synth :)

Semaphore responds:

thanks =D

[[Kriz & F-777] - Taken]

Simply EPIC

I love when you guys Collab!! Please do more!

[[AMP] One More Goal [Final]]

Yes! I was waiting for the final!

So glad it made it to the top of the week!

[Moonbouncer (Remix)]

I love...

This song, and possibly you. Because this is just awesome!

[{R2} Blue Horizon]

Cute initial Kick XD

Haha just kidding, it sounds really good :)

Glad you updated it, I like this! It is mixed really well, though the drum samples are limited and kind of bland after a while, This middle section really helps keep the interest though, so don't worry about it being boring, because it really isn't.

I don't have much for recommendations other than kind of boost the beat and drum samples a little, that would really help the over all flow of the song I think, everything else sounds pretty good (The bass could use a little boost too maybe?)

Great song!

[Far From Your World]

STRONGER KICK!!

But I always say that XD

This isn't hip hop either :o So I am actually glad I found it lol, this is really promising, especially for your first of this genre right? Keep up the work, not too much else to complain for a first try :)

Ayeso responds:

I WAS ALL DRUNK WHEN I MADE IT THATS Y NONE OF THIS STUFF MAKES SENSE BUT IT IS MY FIRST RAVE SONG THO. THANKS I REALLY APPRECIATE IT

[8bit Mic Test]

LMFAOFL

The song is awesome, a little empty, even for a chip tune, could use an arpeggio synth or something lol.

The voice is what kills it, needs a little more editing of it. The voice is a little overpowering. And doesn't really fit the song, but I am sure you know that, if the lyrics are real XD.

good work!

Iwannahamster responds:

THANK YOU FOR ALL THE LETTERS YOU PUT ON MY COMPUTER SCREEN. HOW DID YOU GET ON MY COMPUTER ALL THE WAY FROM YOUR COMPUTER!?!?

WHAT DO YOU MEAN THAT THE VOICE NEEDS EDITING? I SPENT 9 HOURS EDITING IN MSPAINT.