The over all vote on this song is very depressing
This deserves a much higher rating than it has. Though I believe it is because it is misplaced. This does seem to have a more Ambient, or even Misc feel than a dance song. (Just because I cant see myself ever actually dancing to this song...)
Though, it is still an AMAZING work, Keep it up! This is really good. (Just try to put it where people looking for it will find it, that will increase the votes I am sure ;)
Ok then.
This was drastically in need of different synths, and TONS more... everything else that is missing. (almost everything lol)
The melody (of what I could hear, the synth chosen kind of burried it with the constant rattle) Was pretty good, and did sound very Oriental, so I think a much different synth (I read a review here suggesting Violin, DO IT!) and a bunch more everything else, and this could actually be something that doesn't take work to listen to.
Score work (Meaning, the written melodies and such) = 6/10
Instrument/s chosen = 0/10
Painful and hard to listen to = -2
Because I just feel like being a jerk right now (And because the initial ringing burned my ears, more pain...) = -2
over all... 2/10...
I do think you can do better than this.
Mhmm >_<
I really don't understand why this is rated so painfully low... I like this better than my own stuff, and I at least bounce above 3, I mean really. This is at the VERY LEAST a three.
Great work! Sure a little skimpy on instruments and background synth, but it gives off a really cool tropical kind of relax paradise feel to it. I really like it!
Awesome job!
Oh my :o!
This is excellent! The main bass could use a little tweaking (maybe a lot...) But otherwise this is really good! The melodies throughout are amazing! The only problem I have with this track is that the background sounds are a little off sounding, or just not edited enough to fully counterpart the EPIC!!!!!! Melody choices.
Great work! Seriously, epic. Just the editing of the lower sounds and this could be perfect :o!!
Thank you my friend!
Why?
... just... why?
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WHY!?
Change the main synth
The main synth running through the whole thing is too loud, and raspy. It needs a more full drum sample, so some hat and claps in there, maybe another running hat to fill in sound.
A bass line would be awesome, some pad maybe too. (The one that comes in about a minute and twenty seconds is alright, too soft and drowned out by the main synth)
this does have a TON of potential, just completely under done. Needs a lot of stuff to it.
the main thing you need to do is add a limiter to the main master channel, that way nothing will blast over and burn the ear drums. Then you need to drastically drop the sound, and maybe change out completely the main synth used. Add a bunch more drum samples to fill in the beat so it isn't just the constant boom boom boom boom. which sometimes works, but not all on its own through an entire 3 minute song ;)
I say this to help you out, I am in no way bashing your work or trying to make you feel like you suck, because this could be really good. It is just missing a lot of key ingredients ;)
Thank you. I am always looking for constructive criticism. And I just listened to the song from this website. I was unaware the EQ was messed up. It sounded fine coming from iTunes. The unfortunate thing is that my PC crashed and I lost the data for this song. I have tried reconstructing it, but I have been unable to. Also if you want to hear my newest tracks you can visit my myspace: http://www.myspace.com/x-killanrg Also you download my tracks at either http://soundcloud.com/search?q[fullte xt]=x-killa or at http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defau lt.cfm?bandID=754487&content=widgets. I know my music is usually repetitive, but I am getting better, I think.
Sound quality
this is really good song over all! Just needs a lot of work editing the chosen instruments and drum samples. the ones chosen are good, but could be mastered a lot to get a better quality out of them, even if it is a lower size ;)
Very good work! Keep it up ;)
I want to cry...
The first minute intro was perfect, and when the actual song hit it just got better and better :o!!!
Sure the over all sound could be edited here and there, but that's what starting out gets you, experience to do better.
You are much better than I already, Wow really, keep up the great work! I love this!
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