Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

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Wow :D

I am pretty sure you will get better if you keep working at it :D This is already really good!

The intro is really long, and most Newground listeners only have the attention span for 3 second intros, which is sad for Trance producers since the intros are beautiful and can run up to three minutes alone lol.

But anyway, great work! Suggestions, I could only really say add some percussion and a baseline :) That's all thats missing! seriously, good job!

thanks for the upload ;)

[Sakura Bana]

Great start :D

And your right, definitely a Japanese feel to it, oriental at the very least.

Tips: I would suggest a baseline, and since it's trance a nice side-chain baseline always works best. This is where you have a 4/4 kick going and every off beat is a bass note ((usually I would use 3xOsc with a low octave and saw inserts, assuming you use FL Studio of course lol)) The off beat would then be ((in the pattern selector)) every third hit.

that's really the only thing missing :) Well, maybe a nice string pad or something, but thats extra ;)

Great job :D!

[EPIC LOOP!]

KICK DRUM!!

I can kind of hear one, but it's so small, this is techno, LOUD AND PROUD BASS KICK!! WOOMP WOOMP WOOMP WOOMP!! :D yeah? Thats the first good idea, this is great though! Just missing the huge kick.

A small hat on the off beat would be cool too, a side-chaining hat, just to keep it classy.

This is really great though! Maybe double up the length too? Add some random FX in there, make it seem like its progressing even if it loops over and over :)

Great work!

[Electro Vibes - Chill]

What in the world...

The score for this is RIDICULOUSLY low, this is wonderful! There is no reason this is not at LEAST a 4.

Great work here :D just a little short, but still, the ideas you have are wonderful :)!

[Stephen4705- Into the sunset]

So far epic!

What system do you use to make this? This is incredible :D

I've not heard anything like it anywhere!

Please do finish!!

STEPHEN4705 responds:

Wow, thanks! :D

I'm currently using Fl studio 9, with a whole load of freeware downloads.

Ste :D

[Purple Drank (Electro)]

Loven it!

Though, there is a purple can called Relax Drank here where I live, and this reminded me of that drink XD ((it's like weed in a can I swear!))

Great work though! I just let it loop a while ;) this is great. Thanks for the upload!

[(Dj-Admin)Stuck in my Head]

SYTRUS!!

I love sytrus settings :D

This is awesome! The only thing I am unsure if I like or not is the clap, how it goes once, then one and one. Yeah, only for that one little while.

But other than that it's awesome :D Thanks for the upload! ((Try adding some strings or pad in the background for a boost of over all sound and feel))

Djadmin responds:

Thanks for the review, but I may not be able to change anything as I only have a demo of FL. I will try though.

[-AEF- Midnight]

Amazing!

Poor cat :'(

But this song is wonderful!! I love the blend of VG synths and more popular electro sounds :D

AetherFlaer responds:

Thanks dude. I'm glad you liked it!

[Annynomus0 - Even If They Help]

Awesome :D

I love the transition at 1:00!!

the melody is awesome too! Great work! Thanks for the upload :)