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[inochi no hajime]

Amazing =O

Cant believe I had to almost reach page 300 just to find this!

It almost sounds like a few of my older works, only much better lol...

I would suggest more equalizing and mastering of the instrument synths, and most trance ((Probably all)) has a really noticeable kick beat to it, I can hardly hear the kick drum in this song, so a more powerful kick drum would be nice :)

I think it is a fruity kick no? That one is hard to make sounds good :/ So no worries I understand where you are coming from lol. I would also suggest to make the bass notes come in every off beat, so its drum kick then bass, it makes the song more lively and bouncy =D

So yeah, for being so old, this is awesome! Thanks for not deleting it lol!

[Zydar-Lost in a Trance]

I don't like Odd numbers, so I gave the 8...

instead of 7 lol.

The drum loops were kind of random and... well, not very easy to do any type of moving or dancing to. So that could be fixed :)

The over all sounds are very... well, all over the place and it's kind of difficult to pick out any main defining Melody and Harmony. Though I can hear from the background synth what it is supposed to sound like, it is hard to pick it out from the other synth being used. So a more defined Melody and Harmony would be nice, and maybe ((I know from seeing other comments that you already did)) But maybe add a STRONGER bass, and a more ((As I keep saying)) Defined bass line, instead of a like 190 BPM kick drum in there ye?

Not horrible :D Definitely better than my first songs lol

[FLS trance FTW]

Make me look like a noobsauce why don't ye :p

Lol but seriously, this is awesome, really just chillax and pro quality sounds, I can definitely tell you take the time to actually work on your songs and make sure the sounds are perfect and planned :)

Someone once told me: "It only takes half a brain to make Techno, that is why it is so stupid." So I got really upset, but then inspired ((Because I thought it would be easy lol)) To try and create some techno, then I discovered first hand his comment was empty and way false!

Great work! ((Sorry for random spam))

Barrellaj responds:

haha thanks dude for an awesome review, I need to hear more like that.. and believe it or not this is just about the first song I've ever mad and it really is just flat out simple. drum kick, bass number 14 or so on nexus, a nice pluck, and a saw and there's the song. but I really do appreciate cause I've always thought of this as one of my best songs.

and you're friend might actually be a little right, it's almost easier to make techno the less you know. sometimes it gets overwhelming when you know what to do, but ya wing it when ya don't and it comes out not half bad :P

[Dream Come True~]

Awesome :D

Only real thing is the mastering and equalizing doesn't seem to add up like it could//should. The drum loop is a little too loud and drowns out the main melody a lot, and some of the other smaller background sounds are barely noticeable even. So it's not a huge deal, but equalizing and mastering the volumes and pitch controls and everything will make it sound just that much more professional! :D

Otherwise this is very good! AWESOME! Thanks for the upload!

[Techno Reactor [Original]]

Excellent X2!

The intro had me kind of nervous, but it turned out excellent! Great work :D

[Like a Saturday]

Voices be tough no?

I tried making one with voices and it bombed hardcore XD

Good job! Keep working on the lyrics!

["Forever Gone" - Etalo]

Earned the place ;)

Top of the week, this definitely is an earned work :)

When the bass kicks in around :50 I was blown away XD and from there on I was just hooked! Great work!

[The Shame of Living]

There ye go :)

This is awesome :)

Thanks!!

InclinedInEverything responds:

Thanks dude

[Zeon 'M']

Awesome!

I would just say it could use some more mastering of the over all sound of everything, some things seemed a little over powering and other things just not powered enough you know?

But this was amazing!

[Hobbit Trance (demo)]

ya yike!

Finish, it is almost cruel to post something so great as only a demo XD

Awesome work!

ThunderBeats responds:

haha, thank you :) I recently uploaded the finished version! It's called "Hobbit Trance" (surprise surprise)