Treysen's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pwn-MGA-]

Preset librarian.

I hear a lot of un-original sounds as usual, should maybe try and make your own so you sound more special.

Mr-green-apple responds:

sorry you like hitty music i really am kid......just cuz things sound good doesnt mean you dont have to like them.

[Zelda-MGA-]

Eh... nothing special

GodlessHeretic is right. I guess you just cant accept criticism worth anything. And he is right, you need verity.

Mr-green-apple responds:

get over yourself kid just cuz i make better shit then you doesnt mean you gotta come and be liike ohh your shit isnt good oh by the way this not nexus this actually the shitty sytrus "original sounding" vst you like and of course its better then anything you could do with it

[Kissed A Girl-MGA-]

The kick was drowned out.

Couldn't really hear the kick. The mastering on this one isn't as good as it could be :p

(don't complain about me reviewing these, you told me to :p )

And still just hear very few home made anything, lots of samples ((and then the acapella :p ))

Mr-green-apple responds:

you just dont like me because im waaaayyy better then you.....and what are you talking about this whole track made by me i just cant take credit for katy perrys lyrics. just cuz you dont make every single sound doesnt mean anything. itd be like saying oh i made a snare in this track but i cant use it in any other track because that wouldnt be original. you are a real fag

[The Way of 8-Bit (W I P) FIX]

Ho dang! this is amazing.

For that first arp in the beginning I would suggest adding a little bit of reverb to make it sound a little more full (And blend in with the other sounds a little more)
LOVE THE MARIO ;)

Man your skills are improving drastically, great work :)

Just be careful of that saw bass, it's a little overpowering and makes some points in the song kind of muffled (1:20 is where I caught it most, and earlier in the song it did it too) So make sure that sounds don't control each other and drown out the goodies.

otherwise this is great :)

Epic ending too ;)

djresset responds:

i will fix that when the full version is out

[Love's First True Sight]

For sad-face

The kick and the song was way out of timing :/ What program do you use? Because this needs some help I'm afraid v_v

TechnicolourNuance responds:

Hahahah yeahh, I know.
It was a program on my friends comp, not sure which, but I could always ask. I wasn't sure how to align the melody with the kick- it was really weird. But that aside, is the melody decent? I was thinkinng have that melody stay consistent throughout the entire thing, softer volume as it changes the octave and add a transitional harmony then go straight into the end melody. Any ideas how that may work?

Ayways, thanks for your input :3

[A Castalian Avalon]

Must say...

I don't like any of the parts Castaliankittenn told you to add, they sound nasty and kill the song :/

So, you did a great job :) But the DIST guitar thing totally kills the best parts :p In my unpro opinion.

Avalonkittenn responds:

The funny part about it, is that I disliked that, too. (DON'T TELL CASTALIAN I SAID THAT). xDD

But, yeah. I completely agree. The Dist Guitar could be replaced with a different instrument, maybe a more warmer one... That's what I feel for. Man.. that does sound icky. But I DO like the breakdown. (:

Thank you for your feedback, anyhow! :D

[Elecman's Stage (Remix)]

LOL cunning XD

Like anyone on this website knows anything Xp (Well, maybe like seven people)

Towards the end I kind of lost interest, maybe could shorten it up, or even turn it into a loop? Because I like this game, and song ;)

Great job though!

Birdinator99 responds:

Yea, long endings seem to be somewhat of a standard thing that gets added on to most of my songs, sigh... not always a good thing.

Glad you liked it for the most part, though. Thank you!

[DJ TastyTeo - Scare]

Almost sounds VG-ish for a while :D

for a fifth song this is pretty good :O Like, wow skill!

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TastyTeo responds:

Thank you my friend!! :D Check out my new stuff!

[(Dj-Admin)Stuck]

Sound originality wasn't that great.

The musicality was awesome, but as far as making your own sounds, eh... could try to be more original on that aspect. But hey this is really good :) Keep up the work! And just a hint, do try and make sounds more your own style instead of just suing the plugins presented to you, it makes your works more special ;)

Djadmin responds:

I've been experimenting with altering plugs. Listen to glass jungle, just finished it.

[Rehash]

Really long for a loop o.O

But it's pretty awesome :) Definitely could see this being used in a video game.

mrmcduts responds:

Hey thanks! XD